discuss what you did well + what you need to work on for your DA essay. Then indicate what kind of feedback you would like from readers.
My main focus was to point out how A went from being a victim to the trouble maker and what caused this change.
I feel like I did well with explaining what my main point was. I clearly discussed what the differences between the first and second excerpt. I believe that my introduction stated clearly what the essay would be about. Finding the evidence was easy to reveal. It was hard to transition and compare and contrast exactly how A went from victim to trouble maker.
Feedback?
I would like for my reader to tell my exactly what I did wrong, what you feel I felt out, what you feel I should not have said, and mainly how to improve my essay.
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