I do not really have a plan for revising my paper. I feel like there are some point that my paper can be stronger, for example, I noticed that I really did not have a strong conclusion. When reading my essay I know that I could have a stronger body.
To make my body stronger I could go back to read the text again to see if I discover any new conclusions that can be made. I did not want to make the mistake of going over line by line explaining what was going on and end up repeating myself in the essay. More text can be added to my paper, I believe you can never hurt your paper by giving more detail. Lastly I think the whole structure of my essay can use some revising.
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